From 5e984763ce969d72f749c26b115046e59d9bee71 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Patrick McDermott <pehjota>
Date: Mon, 05 Aug 2019 17:53:35 -0400
Subject: dev/archive/mirroring: Rewrite introduction

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diff --git a/dev/archive/mirroring.mdwn b/dev/archive/mirroring.mdwn
index 506c2a3..c4f441b 100644
--- a/dev/archive/mirroring.mdwn
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@@ -1,9 +1,11 @@
 [[!meta title="Mirroring the ProteanOS Package Archive"]]
 
-Running a mirror of the ProteanOS package archive contributes to the
+Running a public mirror of the ProteanOS package archive contributes to the
 availability of ProteanOS.
 
-You can keep your mirror private or make it an official mirror.
+Organizations deploying many ProteanOS systems are encouraged to make local
+mirrors, which they may keep private or make public, to save bandwidth on both
+their and ProteanOS's infrastructure.
 
 
 Setting up a Mirror
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