From f6dd6f79b5f5a8ce6faeecb342a931c070c4766d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: P. J. McDermott <pehjota>
Date: Sat, 22 Sep 2012 02:55:38 -0400
Subject: Improve some wording in "Editing this Wiki".

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diff --git a/wiki/editing.mdwn b/wiki/editing.mdwn
index 1ae1cbb..ad3e79e 100644
--- a/wiki/editing.mdwn
+++ b/wiki/editing.mdwn
@@ -27,7 +27,8 @@ repository and make it your working directory:
 Editing, Staging, and Committing
 --------------------------------
 
-Now you can simply edit files in your favorite text editor.
+With the repository cloned, you can simply edit files in your favorite text
+editor.
 
 When you've made some changes, stage them to the index with **git-add**(1) and
 commit them to the repository with **git-commit**(1).  For example:
@@ -35,9 +36,9 @@ commit them to the repository with **git-commit**(1).  For example:
     git add wiki/editing.mdwn
     git commit
 
-All of the usual recommendations for commit messages (50-character summary,
-followed optionally by an empty line and detailed text wrapped at 72 characters)
-apply.
+All of the usual recommendations for commit messages (a summary no longer than
+50 characters, followed optionally by an empty line and detailed text wrapped at
+72 characters) apply.
 
 Be aware that the author usernames shown in the wiki's
 [[change_log|recentchanges]] come from the author email addresses in commits.
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