From e2e876bf0ebc1b062cd8645139120ce043223ea0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: P. J. McDermott <pjm@nac.net>
Date: Sun, 27 May 2012 15:21:26 -0400
Subject: Improve feature list text.

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index 501844c..09b416e 100755
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@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 	<h2>What makes this system great?</h2>
 	<div class="a">
 		<h3>Freedom</h3>
-		<p>Every package we provide can be freely used, studied, modified, and distributed.</p>
+		<p>All of the software we provide can be freely used, studied, modified, and distributed.</p>
 		<p><a href="about#freedom">See how software freedom benefits you</a></p>
 	</div>
 	<div>
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 	</div>
 	<div>
 		<h3>Speed</h3>
-		<p>This system boots and runs quickly.</p>
+		<p>This system is designed to boot and run quickly.</p>
 		<p><a href="about#speed">See how well this system can perform for you</a></p>
 	</div>
 </div>
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