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 <!--#set var="title" value="What is This System?" -->
 <!--#set var="pagetitle" value="About This System" -->
 <!--#include file="includes/header.html" -->
-<p>This system is an operating system distribution that is designed and built from scratch rather than based on another distribution.  It takes inspiration from other successful operating systems and boasts its own set of innovative features.  Guided by a commitment to technical excellence and community values, this system offers a competitive solution in a wide variety of applications.</p>
+<p>This system is an operating system distribution that is designed and built from scratch rather than based on another distribution.  It takes inspiration from other successful operating systems and boasts its own set of innovative features.  Guided by a commitment to technical excellence and community values, this system uses the best enterprise-quality technology and offers a competitive solution in a wide variety of applications.</p>
+<p>Designed with embedded devices in mind, this system is kept small and fast.  Small programs are provided, and careful packaging ensures that only the essential components are installed by default.  Every program is specifically optimized for each environment in which it runs, and the system as a whole is designed to be simple and fast.</p>
 <p>This system is a binary distribution, meaning that all of the included software is provided to users in pre-built packages, ready to run on their systems.  This makes it easy for users to install new programs and upgrade the software on their devices.  The "source code" of these packages is equally easy to get, making it simple for developers to study and improve the software they use.</p>
 <h2>Key Features</h2>
 <a name="freedom"><h3>Freedom</h3></a>