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author | P. J. McDermott <pjm@nac.net> | 2012-05-27 15:21:26 (EDT) |
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committer | P. J. McDermott <pjm@nac.net> | 2012-05-27 15:21:26 (EDT) |
commit | e2e876bf0ebc1b062cd8645139120ce043223ea0 (patch) | |
tree | 19df52b61b587fcf0d5afefffd126a6235db8896 | |
parent | 92af44228958659a64b83f70d8e8048ad54e58b9 (diff) |
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@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ <h2>What makes this system great?</h2> <div class="a"> <h3>Freedom</h3> - <p>Every package we provide can be freely used, studied, modified, and distributed.</p> + <p>All of the software we provide can be freely used, studied, modified, and distributed.</p> <p><a href="about#freedom">See how software freedom benefits you</a></p> </div> <div> @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ </div> <div> <h3>Speed</h3> - <p>This system boots and runs quickly.</p> + <p>This system is designed to boot and run quickly.</p> <p><a href="about#speed">See how well this system can perform for you</a></p> </div> </div> |